I really like what you did on your project. From your project I could tell your natural style of writing. You don't write excessively, instead you write about the important details that the reader will care about. The same went for your interview. You did all the required things and your interview with your grandmother sounded really really interesting and I wish you talked about it more. Good job Miguel
The story from your grandma was really cool.
ReplyDeleteI really like what you did on your project. From your project I could tell your natural style of writing. You don't write excessively, instead you write about the important details that the reader will care about. The same went for your interview. You did all the required things and your interview with your grandmother sounded really really interesting and I wish you talked about it more. Good job Miguel
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